Проверьте мини-сочинение. i lean for to be clever. i always discovery new things in school. it will help me in the future. i want have a good profession. also, i lean for my mum.

Istudy in order to be clever. или i study to be clever. i always discover new things at school. i want to have a good job. and, also i study for my mum. вот, будь внимательнее, некоторые ошибки из-за невнимательности

i was asked by teacher.

my mobile phone was stolen last month.

the clothes are made by china.

he was injured by dog.

dog was found by me.

this shoes will be bought by my friend.

i will be invited to the party.

book will bu used  by me.

bus is stopped for me.

his leg was broken on accedent.

poem was written by w.sheakspear.

my key was lost by father.

room will be cleaned by my sister.

house was sold by our neighbour.

my father`s car will be repaired in workshop.

 

 

эта зима я провела в санаторий " кленовая гора"мне было приятно видеть глаза моего младшего брата,впервые увидевшего деда мороза. новый год подрил мне много сюрпризов. дорога к этой гостинице  была чуть больше часа,я не устала потому что со мной были мои друзья,и дорога была шумной и весёлой.мы ездили туда с родителями,и друзьями. когда мы приехали в отель мы начали смотреть номера,где мы жили все эти 5 дней.затем я и моя подруга отправились с нашими братиками в детскую комнату,где их лицо красиво разрисовали -мой братик был тигром! после того ,как мы  отдали малышей к нашим родителям,мы пошли играть в бильярд.потом мы искупались в бассейне.и наконец наступил новый год.было смешно и весело,я никогда не забуду этот 2012 год!

 

 

this winter i has spent to sanatorium "maple mountain". it was glad to see eyes of my younger brother who for  has seen santa claus for the first time. new year has presented to me many surprises. the road to this hotel was hardly more hour, i wasn't tired because with me there were my friends, and the road was noisy and cheerful. when we have arrived to hotel we started to look our rooms, where we lived all 5 days.then i and my friend have gone with our brothers to a children's room where their person have beautifully ornamented brother was a tiger! after we have given kids to our parents, we have gone to play billiards.then we have bathed in pool.and at last there has come new year.it was very ridiculous and cheerful, i never will forget this 2012!